Here’s an
infant’s view about his working mommy and day care center:
Mommy is working,
I am left in the hands,
Of an unknown caring.
To fulfill all demands,
And dreams,
This is a step towards
Our fulfilling gleam.
I like being with other infants,
Like me.
I also made a girlfriend,
Of age three.
Mommy is now always on her toes,
With her tight schedule and woes.
First I like your thought of writing a poem on this topic...nicely written...but it seems like a little incomplete...that something more could be added to the poem. And I think it could be more captivating. Some more feelings could be attached.
ReplyDeleteYes, you are right. Actually this poem was a part of an article written by me long time ago... I will rewrite it soon.
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